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Screenwriting: A better logline for my drama

A better logline for my drama screenwriting

A couple of days ago I put up my first logline. One of you said "show name" meets "show name" isn't technically a logline. I thought it over and came up with this one: A young girl arrives back in her hometown with her family, while struggling to raise her daughter and at the same time harboring a dark secret. This happens in the first episode, but it contradicts what I'm trying to accomplish. I'm trying to write a ensemble script, but I'm new to this and I'm not a writer so this doesn't come naturally to me.

  • 12 months ago

@Marcello Thank you for the website I'll be using it.

  • 11 months ago

I took @Dan Guardino's advice and this is my current logline: A family drama about a young struggling teen mom with a dark secret arrives back in her hometown. I hope you guys like it and I appreciate your help!

  • 11 months ago