Hey, Dan. What a great help! Thanks for the specifics. You're right about the "can't see" words. I tend to get involved in narrative, commentary and sidebars. To me, it makes a better read, but you are right - this is a screenplay, not a novel, short story or another lit piece. Again, thanks a lot for the valuable advice. This another reason why Stage32 is such a great site. The sharing of knowledge.
