One thing I check my writing for is a repetition of a word or phrase that can jar the ear when heard or the eye when read. For example, if something floats in one sentence nothing else should float within a paragraph or two at the very least. Thanks again for posting here. All recommendations are gratefully accepted.
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A Kid Who Just Wanted To Make Movies and My Aha Moment in SCHIZOPOLIS (Part II) by Darrin Dickerson
A Kid Who Just Wanted To Make Movies and My Aha Moment in SCHIZOPOLIS (Part II) by Darrin Dickerson
Great read Julie. Compact and packed with information.
Which begs the question... can a script have too much, or conversely too little, dialog?
Yes, it can. But the question isn't really relevant: dialogue is one of the primary ways that your characters communicate and that the plot moves forward. The question really should be: is this premise working? Is it compelling? It is original? Is it uniquely entertainig? Is it a page turner? :)