I just revised two of my loglines and am interested to get reactions for them. I was prompted to do so becauseI read a suggested article on Stage 32 - sorry, can’t remember who wrote it right now, will look later - and I realized the loglines I’d been sending out we’re way too long.
I immediately got an interested response from the company I first sent one out to - and believe me that had rarely been happening. Will be sending them out to more companies today. Anyhow -
1. Killer Eyes, female-led action thriller, logline -
A female-led contract killer falls in love with a childhood friend and he forces her to choose between him and the business.
Think Leon/The Professional crossed with Colombiana.
2. She Lives Again, horror, logline -
A murderer’s victim re-incarnates as his child and begins to exact her revenge from the womb.
Think Rosemary’s Baby crossed with The Omen..
Also a very nice-sounding gentleman on here suggested a while ago that I post my loglines on his site and I didn’t get around to doing it, then looked for the post a couple of times and couldn’t find it. Does anyone know who that gentleman is/what that site may be?