So I submitted my first Stage 32 pitch (written 2 pager). So for the benefit of other folks who are looking to pitch and might be wondering how harsh the feedback may or may not be, I offer my feedback as tribute (to borrow a saying)..
Hi Damion! Thank you for taking the time to send this pitch for T.A.S.K. The story sounds super fun, and I can totally see it working as a TV or comic book series. That said, I think for future pitches you should consider putting more in there to let your audience know what exactly it is about T.A.S.K. that makes it different from any other super hero shows/movies that are already being made. What makes T.A.S.K. like nothing else?
So. I think that went well for a first timer. What do you guys think?