Hi everyone, I’m Ivan.
I’m developing an original tactical sci-fi body horror IP titled NOISE DISCIPLINE. I’m looking to connect with producers, development executives, writers, directors, and animation studios interested in dark, grounded world-building and co-development.
Rather than just describing the project, I wanted to share a short scene to show how I approach suspense, tactical movement, and visual storytelling on the page:
Darkness.
Three Marines are trapped in a narrow alley. Ammo is critically low. Their formation is broken.
From the pitch-black doorways, a pack of “Alphas” closes in.
The screech of brakes tears through the silence.
A heavy black van drifts into the alley. The rear doors slam open.
A Civil Defense fighter stands in the doorway, wearing a hoodie and baseball cap. In his hands, an M249.
The alley explodes with gunfire.
Muzzle flashes strobe across the walls as the Marines are hit by the blast and noise of the weapon. Their hearing collapses into a high-pitched ringing.
Through it, the gunner shouts:
“WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT?! GET IN THE VAN!”
Training takes over.
The squad instantly rebuilds its formation, covering blind spots and falling back toward the doors. One Marine moves backward while firing. Above them, the gunner creates a wall of suppressing fire.
Then:
A dry metallic click.
The belt is empty.
No cinematic reload.
The fighter grips the smoking weapon against his chest and throws his weight inside the van.
The last Marine jumps in, keeping his sector covered until the doors slam shut.
Screeching tires.
The van disappears into the night.
NOISE DISCIPLINE is built around grounded survival, tactical action, body horror, and a world where the outbreak itself becomes part of the story.
The attached concept images are AI-generated and personally art-directed by me to establish the visual language of the project.
If this kind of storytelling is up your alley, I’d be glad to connect and talk about the project.
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