Just had a pleasant 2nd draft review. I review early so I can make changes.
Curious criticism: Character names were too ordinary.I did not go full porn and have Rock Hard or Bambi BadGirl as character names, although my own introvert self may be keeping me from the ‘hot’ names.
Is there a better character name than Mr. Smith in The Matrix?Should I name the protagonists after weapons, the ‘bad guys’ after venomous animals?
I am being a bit facetious here, I will have to step up my naming choices.
Jim Sharp, Peter Granite, Sylvia Silver, Fiona Fire, comes to mind.
To me it seems like padding a resume.