I love what we did with dialogue from everyone's movies! It was great reading your lines! Lets do it with description!
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Colorado snow blankets a lone stone castle near the peak of Mt. Hasatan. If you get lost out here -- you're dead. -- Opening lines of APARICIO
A WOMAN (mid-20's) in a floral sun dress crouches with her back to a tree. She's breathing hard. Her face is speckled with dirt and blood. In each hand she holds a .45.
A MAN (mid-30s) observes her from a woodcutter's shed. As he wonders if he's seen this trespasser before, he lightly tests the blade of a small hatchet.
Rodney quick, eyes bulged, cat-like, catches her jacket then humbly smooths it out as though he is petting it.
Wait, so Linda, is that a response to Laddie's work, or a real description?! It worked perfectly!!
Jean-Pierre --- I was inspired by Laddie's line. We're hot tonight, gang.
Moonlight filters weakly through the canopy of the dense forest. The site of the Teddy Bear’s picnic earlier. It’s still. Quiet. Forboding. A slight breeze picks up. The foliage RUSTLES. A glimpse of soft fur. A gossamer ribbon. Black, plastic eyes. It’s a TEDDY BEAR, tied to a tree trunk. Upside down.
@Kathryn, I also had a favorite chainsaw moment: Ilona's expression softens. She puts down the chainsaw. This is from a script that theoretically is shooting in the Spring. Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure they cut out the chainsaw. :(
Brava, @Emma. Clicking the little blue +add button 'cause that's awesome.