Screenwriting : Looking for some feedback on a film outline by Onyx London

Onyx London

Looking for some feedback on a film outline

Allo x] I have an upcoming project in the works . The film outline is done and I just want some feedback . Mostly to see if this actually has potential. If you want to read it just let me know . Its a psychological thriller

Jaclyn Abergas

Hey Onyx, I'd be happy to give it a read! How many pages do you have for the outline?

Onyx London

its about four pages .

Jaclyn Abergas

I'd be happy to take a look and give you notes, if you'd like. Is it on your profile?

Mark Ratering

Don't do outline first do a 450 word synopsis and a logline. Maybe others won't tell you I will. Know1 wants to wade through your notes.

Todd Terwilliger

At this early stage, follow whatever process works best for you. If you get to the point of trying to send it out into the industry, you can worry about formal synopsis, treatments, etc. I'd be happy to take a look.

J A Wadsworth

I'd be happy to look at what you're working on

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