Your Stage : My short script, Disruption, has finished post-production... check it out by Anthony Cawood

Good job !!

Thanks for the share. The non fuss sound until the plot really kicked in refreshing. The croaking crickets, squelchy pen on paper of shrink , all natural background sounds. Often in shorts background music kicks in too quick.

1:40 - "my dream usually signifies disruption" - roll credits but if seriously, good set up and pay off for a very contained story. cool music too. not a comment for you but rather for the editor: why keep the sound of the fake knife?

Cool story Anthony!

haha, good stuff, Anthony.

Anthony: I liked it mate!. What a creepy lass. Not an old girlfriend I hope.

Grats!

Thank you all for taking a look, glad it seems to have worked for people... as a writer you always have pangs of doubt when letting people make your work, but Malhar, the Dir, has done a great job in bringing the script to life and also made it in just under 3 months from first contact!

@Phillip... no, but I know a few project managers who may or may not have been the inspiration for her character ;-)

Great work Anthony! Between you Phillip, Bill and a few others I really need to catch up on my short scripts!

@David... At least with shorts it shouldn't take you too long to catch up ;-)

Well, I'm finishing up my first attempt. If it wasn't for my vision impairments I would be able to write faster than I do. So a short to me can take as long as a screenplay (kidding!). I could use feedback on my first attempt when it's done if I have any takers (not everyone at once now).

Happy to give it a read when finished, PM me.

Nice work

Amazing job!

HAHA good twist!

Thanks Jim!