All ready for a few select festivals... https://vimeo.com/158288497 Enjoy!
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Good job, I liked your short.
Good job !!
Thanks for the share. The non fuss sound until the plot really kicked in refreshing. The croaking crickets, squelchy pen on paper of shrink , all natural background sounds. Often in shorts background music kicks in too quick.
1:40 - "my dream usually signifies disruption" - roll credits but if seriously, good set up and pay off for a very contained story. cool music too. not a comment for you but rather for the editor: why keep the sound of the fake knife?
Cool story Anthony!
haha, good stuff, Anthony.
Anthony: I liked it mate!. What a creepy lass. Not an old girlfriend I hope.
Thank you all for taking a look, glad it seems to have worked for people... as a writer you always have pangs of doubt when letting people make your work, but Malhar, the Dir, has done a great job in bringing the script to life and also made it in just under 3 months from first contact!
@Phillip... no, but I know a few project managers who may or may not have been the inspiration for her character ;-)
Great work Anthony! Between you Phillip, Bill and a few others I really need to catch up on my short scripts!
@David... At least with shorts it shouldn't take you too long to catch up ;-)
Well, I'm finishing up my first attempt. If it wasn't for my vision impairments I would be able to write faster than I do. So a short to me can take as long as a screenplay (kidding!). I could use feedback on my first attempt when it's done if I have any takers (not everyone at once now).
Happy to give it a read when finished, PM me.
HAHA good twist!