When it comes to revising scripts, remember that old hides need grease.
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And if the grease does't work, well....they shoot horses, don't they?
What does that mean Phillip?
Crystal: What do you think it means?
To me really right now personally I think it means I shouldn't have kept revising in 'Loglines' where I posted it I regret that
Crystal: That's pretty good.
Should I post it again or wait until I do the video of me reading it (which is going to be interesting)?
Did I mess up?
Nah, Crystal, don't worry about it. "Nobody knows anything," William Goldman. However much you polish it all up, "they" will change it anyway.
I shouldn't repost it then?
Crystal: You can't mess up in this thread. It's not a test... or is it?
Philip.... Crystal, it's your log line. Provided it meets the rules of this forum (basically that it's not offensive), you should post it if you want to post it.
FFR: I don't post loglines here. Only metaphors. Loglines would leave me subject to ridicule and disdain.
Okey dokey and thank you for coming to my defence with Phillip
Phillip I'm still new at to Stage 32 so try not to scare me to bad.... Ok?
Crystal: I'm not here to scare you. I'm a friend to all humanity.
Don't get me wrong I love metaphors (.I speak that language sometimes) it's just that one metaphor kinda scared me a little once I looked at it deeper
I think you meant, "...try not to scare me too badly.." :D
Thanks for not reacting angrily to my edit though your original post sounds more like spoken English in a screenplay. :)
I'm glad you caught it
My old hides are constantly getting re-greased.