Screenwriting : Readers by Jeff D. Sims

Jeff D. Sims


Any script readers here? I'd like to have someone that is well versed in this industry take a look at my pilot script before I begin seeking representation. Working in law enforcement, my creative circle is small (non existent), hopefully someone here can point me in the right direction. Blessings to you all!

Apolos Israel

Not in the industry but I am a writer and I'm willing to read. You can see a sample of my work on my bio

Dan Guardino

Jeff. You might be better off getting one of the script consultants here to read it.

Pierre Langenegger

I can provide notes/analysis. Check out my profile and pm me if you'd like to discuss.

Danny Manus

Hey Jeff, if you are looking for professional notes and feedback, id be Happy to help over at No BullScript. Feel free to message me for more info.

Robert Russo

I had good luck with a script coverage from "Roadmap Writers" 119$ for a feature coverage and whoever you decide to have it done for you, I would say that a coverage is essential. I am also new to screen writing and just got my 1st coverage back and it was very helpful to hear constructive criticism from someone who has read hundreds/thousands of scripts and also written their own movies and tv shows. Eventually you begin to sharpen your story sense. You get a feel for your plot, your pacing, your dialogue, etc. But that comes with practice and especially from feedback, which helps zero you in on trouble areas. Good luck.

Jeff D. Sims

Thanks for the advice and offers!

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