Screenwriting : Script 2nd Draft by Daan de Jong

Daan de Jong

Script 2nd Draft


So is there anyone that wants to review my script for a short film? I'm just a beginner and I would love some feedback.

Pierre Langenegger

Post it to your loglines page.

Daan de Jong

I posted it on my Loglines page. I'm kinda new to writing scripts and stories so I'm sorry if some things aren't correct or just kinda lame.

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