Screenwriting : Walking characters. by Neo Bryce

Neo Bryce

Walking characters.

What should the heading me when, for example, a character is outside a building first (EXT. A CONVENIENCE STORE - NIGHT) and then he has to continue to walk to the street (EXT. STREETS - NIGHT- WALKING?) from that spot outside the convenience store. I sometimes get confused about this. Another instance is when a character is inside a restroom (INT. RESTROOM - DAY) but the restroom is inside a mall. So when he walks out, is it INT. MALL - DAY or EXT. RESTROOM - DAY? Or maybe I'm just overthinking it.

Pierre Langenegger

Yeah, I think you're over thinking it.

EXT. CONVENIENCE STORE - NIGHT

Bob leaves the store and walks down the sidewalk and approaches the mall.

INT. MALL RESTROOM

Bob washes his hands.

INT. MALL

Bob leaves the restroom and enters the gun store.

Things to consider: 1) I didn't include the ToD for the scenes inside the mall, particularly within the restroom, there won't be windows so DAY or NIGHT will be irrelevant. 2) When your character leaves the restroom, he's still inside the structure so it is still INT. Your example is exactly the same as a character leaving a kitchen and standing in the living room but outside the kitchen. It's still INT.

Neo Bryce

Pierre Langenegger thanks! I’ve always wondered about this.

Charles Mathews

some screenplays write EXT/INT is that also correct?

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