There was a post here about opening scenes. It had a video of the first few minutes of the thing. It prompted me to go back and look at my opening scenes. A have polished up some. Remember, no second chance at a first impression.
My person favour is from my script “Amy”. We see a young woman completely disinterested in the police interview she is being put through. Slumped in her chair not even listening to what is being said. That is okay, because all the dialogue and sound is from another scene. It is a series of telephone conversations played over the top of the video of the interview.
We finally cut to the people in the telephone conversation. One of them is the girl being questioned by Police - Amy.
So what is your best opening. Why? And what would you change? If anything.