Screenwriting : Character Names by Erick Mertz

Erick Mertz

Character Names

I was taught to give every character a name, JANE as opposed to LANDLORD, however small. This seems cumbersome though, and really, really over the top. What's the current line people are drawing?

Kerry Douglas Dye

Who taught you that? And what was their argument? The most important thing is readability. How does it add to readability to have my one-off character described as JOE rather than MECHANIC? HAKIRA rather than MASKED NINJA?

Robert Campopiano

I've read in the "Screenwriter's Bible" by Dave Trottier and in a few other places that if it's a lead or a major supporting character, give him/her a name, but if it's a minor character that's only in one scene, a generic name such as "Landlord", "Hot Dog Vendor" or whatever their job or situation is, that's fine, or if they're multiple, minor characters such as "Cop 1", "Cop 2", etc.

Erick Mertz

@Kerry -- Screenwriter's conference MANY YEARS AGO. The advice never struck me as good advice. Especially if that character is unknown to my hero/protag.

Marcelo Dietrich

I can appreciate all points made. I approach this subject from the POV of an actor... Let me 1st say that while I am a writer, producer & director, I was & am an actor 1st. In all aspect of production, I look at all matters from all points of view - especially when they involve the talent. With that, for a screenwriter, it is easier to list a title, ie "LANDLORD" - no specific name(s). For an actor, it helps - me anyway - to have something more to go on. A name would serve that. Being a "JANE" will get a better performance than "LANDLORD". If the character's name is "LANDLORD", perhaps this a discussion the director should have with the actor... I hope you all are well!

CJ Walley

Erick, if you ever see the person who threw up that advice again, kick them in the throat for me.

Alan Tregoning

I will sometimes give minor characters an adjective to go along with their label. Grumpy Landlord, Angry Man, Bratty Kid, Flustered Mom, etc.

Rafael Pinero

Right on CJ

Terri Viani

I really think this is a matter of preference. I wouldn't give a name to the generic server character at McDonald's whose only line is "do you want fries with that?" but I have no issue naming a character I know won't appear again, if s/he has a number of lines in a scene. I don't spend hours coming up with perfect name - it will be something like Boss Todd or Co-Worker Jim - but I like to give even the smaller characters a bit of personality. I also do what Alan said above, Grumpy Landlord or Aggravating Shopper or what have you. I recently read a script where characters who had chunks of dialogue had no names; didn't like that at all.

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