"A renowned scientist creates the ultimate immortality drug, now he’s dead and it’s missing; leaving his trusted guinea-pig brother to find both his killer and the BLUEPRINT if he wants to save the entire world, that is." What do you think of this logline?
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I d switch the sentence and rewrite, use the guinea pig brother in the first sentence. He is the main character? BLUEPRINT is a confusing word. Maybe use FORMULA, since it s about a drug ?
Ha!Ha!...Thanks Dan for stumping me...lol
BLUEPRINT is the title of my pilot
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Cool. Kinda like "DaVinci Code" meets "Limitless"
Thanks Jim...I'm reworking it right now
How about the main character wants people to die and the bad guys are actually good guys trying to save the world with this drug?