Screenwriting : Moonlight by Christopher Binder

Christopher Binder

Moonlight

For those who have seen the film, do you feel like the main character was too passive for too long in the story? I've been guilty of this before in my scripts with professionals telling me to get my guy going sooner in the story, but in the case of Moonlight, well, been getting a lot of praise and awards. Also, thought the first shot/scene should've been cut and the film should have started with the boy getting chased through the grass.

I liked Moonlight but thought it had some obvious flaws. What are your thoughts?

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