Your Stage : My first screenplay. Tell me the truth, what do you think of it? by Ruisi Liu

Ruisi Liu

My first screenplay. Tell me the truth, what do you think of it?

My first ever screenplay. What do you think? I have no previous experience with screenplays, and I’m a 16 year old from Canada. Please give me constuctive criticism it as much as possible, I’d really like to improve. Tell me what’s good, and what’s bad. The more honest, the better! https://drive.google.com/open?id=1T2TTT4TQ2t5EYb75PvGi1pHy8WnTyFEw I’m also new to this community, and are we allowed to openly share our scripts like this?

Martina Cook

Hi Ruisi, you are using a stage play rather than a screenplay format. Screenplay is for movies. Stage is theatre. I suggest you look for a screenplay of a movie you like and see the correct format. Also, grab a screenwriting book or two and see what the general structure is like. This is a fairly safe community to share your work, however it is usual practice to register your work to any copyright company. Maybe do it once you are happy with? Good luck!

Ruisi Liu

Ahhh sorry my bad, i meant script. Regardless, what do you think?

Martina Cook

Is this for a film or a stage play (theatre)?

Ruisi Liu

theatre, i think... but both may work?

Ruisi Liu

how do i make it screenplay form? Just set the font to Courier?

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