The following is another one of my award-winning animations:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EpDR7rqZxFo
It's about 5 minutes long. Any feedback you care to provide will be appreciated.
By the way, it won 4th place in the Micro-Animation Division in the 2018 Indie Gathering Film Festival and Screenplay Competition. (My animation on purchasing discount airline tickets earned third place in this same competition.)