So, a little while ago... I posted a request for feedback in the Cinematography lounge and got some golden nuggets (even though I just found out you aren't supposed to post there.... Woops!)
You can find that post here: https://www.stage32.com/lounge/cinematography/Cant-Figure-it-Out
Now, I have gotten more practice using that advice, and I need EVEN MORE ADVICE! I want to nail this look. I am not a good cinematographer, but I am the only one I've got since this film is shoestring budget.
I want to make the best short film I can muster, and it all starts with the feeling my images portray.
Please take a look at this short snippet, and tell me how it makes you feel. I am eager to learn, and can take anything you throw at me. I have a very hard head and skin made of rubber cement. I hope you enjoy, I sure as hell had a blast making this.
Awesome! This is just practice for the upcoming film, so I did not design it with any story in mind yet. I'm strictly going for the feeling on this, trying to gather thoughts. Your one of the few who actually like the jump cut... Hmmmm.