I after years of self doubt I got the courage to write down the beautiful stories I had been playing in my mind. I realise though that I need help on the dialogue. As a not so sociable person, I have a hard time making small talk.
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Hi Surina, nice to meet you. Welcome to Stage 32 :-)
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Thank you Adam. Excited to be here
Welcome, Surina. Weaknesses in certain aspects of writing are common. Having the awareness that you need to improve an element is half the battle. Here if you ever wish to talk further about your writing.
Small talk is overrated. Its the things that people don't say, the subtext is what really matters. "Not so sociable" in my world means I can't put up with fake people. If you ever have an action or sci-fi script you need feedback on, hit me up.
Thank you Phil ill definitely make use of the offer.
Anthony it soundslike we live in the same world, but I still know that to improve is to know what my weak points is and learn how to fix it.
Hey Surina, glad to have you. Nicks pointing out some good resources, but other than those be sure to read scripts of shows and films you think have great dialogue. Really study how they do it and you'll be surprised how much you can absorb.
Thank you Nick I will do that. Allen I have been doing that, yet I still feel that I need some extra help. My story is a good one. With the the perfect dialogue it'll be great.
Vincent Iet's have a chat and see if we can work something out
Look at my post and see if it's in your thinking.