Your Stage : Logline redo, opinions please. Thank you. by Tim Dutton

Tim Dutton

Logline redo, opinions please. Thank you.

The Native American Trickster, Coyote has returned to remake the world, Tala Wilde must stop him by convincing the other Totems they don’t want a perfect world.

Gary Smiley

Coyote, the Trickster of the Totems, returns to Earth, looking to reshape perfection out of madness but Tala Wilde knows that he/she has to stop him. First try, don't know if I helped...

Tim Dutton

Much better than mine, loglines, the most important part of this business is my greatest weakness. Thank you, Gary Smiley

Roman BRuni

Coyote is going to remake the world by destroying all that

the Totems build for mankind. Is Tala Wilde ready to face

the biggest trickster of native americans in his own terms ?

Roman BRuni

'native americans' is not good for the description...

cause it makes me think 'race' instead of ' genre '.

Coyote is kind of like ' Q ' in Star Trek Next Generation

or Coyote is kind of like ' Loki ' in Avengers ?

Tim Dutton

Thanks, Roman BRuni

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