Hey new to stage32 and screenwriting I'm finishing my first script now confuse because no one wants to read it. I stay in rural area in Virginia no group or anything. I just need someone to be honest and tell me what I need work on
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Do you have a logline and a synopsis? That should help.
I just done logline check it out
Your logline is all over the place. You need to tighten it up to just one sentence and be more specific. Why is is life a mess? What is his goal? Who or what is his main obstacle? If your logline doesn't catch the readers eye, then they will most likely pass on reading the script.
Anthony Moore I will definitely take it down and write new one thanks for the advice
Anthony Moore check out my new logline
Much better!!! He has a deformity, he is harassed and he must learn to love himself. That is a logline that will spark interest in reading your script.
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If you can afford it, get final draft, there are others but this is the one I personally trust. Do the tutorial, and away you go!
Dylan Dawson how do I go about getting it. I only have my phone I been using dub script