I am looking for feedback on my story. Yes it is my own story lol. This is pretty accurate to how it happened and so I want feedback on Midpoint, All Is Lost events.
After an insecticide chemical leak killing four people, a former engineering intern changes industries, but when she discovers a natural solution to insecticides, she must forge her own path before more people die.
I am only in outline phase right now but the story has to be there..