Filmmaking / Directing : New Sci-Fi Pilot by David Lettis

Hi All, I just posted a logline and pilot script for my new sci-fi series, Harris Creek. I'd love and appreciate its some of you would check it out and give me some feedback. I'd be happy to check out your projects in return and definitely hope we can work together in the future. Thanks! https://www.stage32.com/profile/201300/Screenplay/Harris-Creek