New script out but I'm doing my best to believe that it will be seen by producers and directors. Who really wants to take on a project that went from an adventure story to a mystery and thriller? That's what it turned into after I changed the villain. In my opinion, the villains were very weak and boring. The new villain is about getting into the minds of those that have wronged her in the past. I hope it gets an audience soon.
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What's the screenplay about? Do you have a logline?
Heidi Schussman A notorious extortionist plays mind games with masterminds. Involving herself into their plot to kill a man and slowly tortures a mother and son along the way.
Tell me more. I'm not getting a picture of the real story?
I've got the same problem with my logline for Piratessa... can't seem to get it short enough and yet tell exactly what the story is about.
Heidi Schussman Shelly Owens is a master manipulator and plays mind games with masterminds behind a plot to kill a man named Nick Rivers. Along the way, she slowly tortures a mother and son. Molly and Sherman Matthews. All to reveal a secret about Molly's past and sins.
Why is Owens playing mind games? What does she hope to accomplish? Revenge? Why are the bad guys trying to kill Rivers? Why in the world is Owens torturing the Mathews for secrets? Are those secrets going to reveal something about the plot to kill Rivers?
as much as I want to, I can't tell you. I can tell you Rivers has nothing to do with Molly's secret.
I understand, but the way it's worded sounds like everything is unrelated. Try to find some way to connect the two.
I can't reveal too much. there are many questions and they will be answered.
Okie dokie