Screenwriting : Looking for a feedback for my scripts I'm working on. by Gabriel Bonilla

Gabriel Bonilla

Looking for a feedback for my scripts I'm working on.

I'm posting this because I wrote a web series and a shortfilm, and I'm starting to write a feature film but I'm insecure about the theme and tone, which will be controversial and problematic for some audiences when they read the cript and watch the entire film.

The only problem is I don't have money to pay a script doctor and give a feedback and notes of these screenplays, so the only option is here -I guess- if you want to help me out.

Pierre Langenegger

Post them to your loglines page so people can read them and give feedback.

Laurie Woodward

Join a critique group. It helped my writing grow tremendously.

Gabriel Bonilla

Pierre Langenegger I posted the loglines on my profile, so you can check them out.

Julia Petrisor I sent you the friend request.

Pierre Langenegger

Gabriel Bonilla a logline does nothing for me, why not post the script as well? What's the difference between posting here and emailing it to someone you've never heard of?

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