Screenwriting : When submitting a synopsis to producers by Jane Tumminello

Jane Tumminello

When submitting a synopsis to producers

Should we reveal the ending of our story when submitting a synopsis? I've read both yes and no. Any thoughts would be appreciated.

Christopher Phillips

Depends on why you are sending a synopsis. If it's a cold query, then no. You get up to the first 1/2 to 3/4 of the story. Two paragraphs. Three tops. If the producer requested the synopsis in lieu of a script, a one page synopsis does include the ending. Third person. High-level narration, which should lean in the style of the genre. And emphasize character.

Danny Manus

YES! if it sounds great, they'll want to read the script to make sure it's as good as it sounded. DO Give it away in a synopsis and a pitch. DONT give it away in a query letter, one sheet or logline!

Rosalind Winton

A synopsis should always be an outline of the WHOLE story and the complete arc of the main character/s :)

CJ Walley

Sending a synopsis without the ending would like sending a business plan without the bottom line.

Rashika R

CJ nailed it. Exactly what I was going to say!

Jim Boston

Jane, go ahead and reveal the ending of your story when you're sending its synopsis to producers.

After all, how would it look if you built a house without a floor plan?

Craig D Griffiths

The reason I tell everything (in all circumstances - even a logline) is a producer is a collaborator. Why wouldn’t give them everything. They will be make a decision based on the entire story. So you are forcing them to take an extra step, asking for the ending, before they can make a decision.

Jane Tumminello

This is all extremely helpful. Thanks!

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