Did a written pitch prep with Joey yesterday(which I thought I didn't need. It was the best short critique I ever had. Focused, on point, keyed to my characters and story. He brings an executive eye to the material that writers don't often have. Eliminating "toxic" words and phrases was alone worth the price.
James, thanks for sharing. This is feedback that I, as a new member, am looking for to ensure that I'm in a good network. I wish you all the best.