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DESTROYING DECROT VOLUME ONE: THE MONOLITH

DESTROYING DECROT VOLUME ONE: THE MONOLITH
By Jeffrey Gonell

GENRE: Sci-fi
LOGLINE:

A super-powered martial arts master teams up with ex-soldiers to lead a popular uprising against the dictator of planet Decrot.

 

SYNOPSIS:

Short Summary: Evanor Ovelum, a master of the Temple Warriors martial arts clan, joins forces with ex-soldiers to lead a revolution against Usharo Viuna, the tyrannical emperor of planet Decrot. They form the Liberty Knights militia and race against time to destroy the Monolith, a supercomputer that would give Emperor Usharo Viuna ultimate power if it ever went online. All echelons of Decrotin society participate in the planet-wide revolution against Viuna, which culminates in a Death Duel between Master Ovelum and Emperor Viuna for control of the throne.

Long Summary: As the Chief Commander of the Liberty Knights, Evanor Ovelum goes from city to city to save citizens from the atrocities of the Supreme Army. Though Evanor Ovelum is the face of the revolution, it is his son Grewks Ovelum who must make the ultimate transformation. Grewks is a super strong teenaged martial arts warrior with extreme anger issues. The Goddess of Gold, the celestial goddess worshipped by the Temple Warriors, shows Grewks how to relinquish his rage, because only through benevolence, could the war truly be won.

Before becoming the emperor of planet Decrot, Usharo Viuna was a renown galactic hero. He was the most decorated officer in the history of the Space Defense Force, but after taking the Decrotin throne in a murderous coup, he became the worst tyrant ever to sit on it. General Tisan Zaphos-Rhina was Viuna’s right-hand man but decided to go against him when construction for the Monolith began. Zaphos-Rhina made it possible for Evanor Ovelum to survive the onslaught on City Forest and was the one who sparked the popular revolution against Emperor Usharo Viuna.

The revolution takes the planet by storm and all echelons of Decrotin society participate. But even though the Liberty Knights make massive gains against Usharo Viuna, if they don’t find a way to destroy the Monolith in time, the Supreme Army will reign over planet Decrot forever.

Jeffrey Gonell

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Jeffrey Gonell

Evanor Ovelum, a master of the Temple Warriors

martial arts clan, joins forces with ex-soldiers to lead a revolution against

Usharo Viuna, the tyrannical emperor of planet Decrot. They form the

Liberty Knights militia and race against time to destroy the Monolith, a

supercomputer that would give Emperor Usharo Viuna ultimate power if it

ever went online. All echelons of Decrotin society participate in the planet-

wide revolution against Viuna, which culminates in a Death Duel between

Master Ovelum and Emperor Viuna for control of the throne.

Vincent Turner

how is it reading on paper?

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