Judith Marie-Ange Edmorin: Screenwriter in Morecambe, United Kingdom.

LOGLINE #1 or #2

Working with my screenwriter, Christina Patjens aka Lucie de Jong, on loglines for my screenplay; below is the result. Which one do you prefer: #1 or #2?

1. Tumultuous times in Saudi Arabia and France in the seventies influence a young American expat’s life after she discovers that her yet-to-be-beli...

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Rosemond Perdue

I like #2 but where is the woman an expat? can you replace the word arcane with something more descriptive? And can you tease the outcome that this secret will create?

Carina S. Burns

Rosemond Perdue, I just played around with these: After a rebellious expat accidentally discovers the staggering truth about her parentage, she doubts everything she's ever learned, and still her over...

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Maurice Vaughan

Who's the main character in the story, Carina S. Burns? I like your new second logline, but it sounds like the mother is the main character because she has the goal in the story ("her tight-lipped mot...

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