THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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By Jack Morrison
SYNOPSIS:
Bobcat (Kimberley) suspects her leopard boyfriend (Mal) of infidelity. Starting small, the fight escalates until Kimberley threatens to trash a valuable painting of Mal’s. As the truth about the previous night is gradually revealed, so are the spiderwebbing cracks in their relationship.
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Tasha Lewis what made you give it 4 stars?
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After reviewing and checking for what is required, I use the script checklist on my wall, and examine if it is high concept, relatable characters, marketable script along with binge worthy.
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Nate Rymer as I see you decide to give it 4 stars how do you feel about the idea?
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Hi Jack! I like the anthropomorphic angle with this idea, it's ripe for humour from the relationship POV viewed through animal kingdom-style dynamic. I would touch up the logline a little just to really sell the confrontation and why the relationship is at stake, and this is an easy 5 stars :)
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Danny J what made you give it 4 stars
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