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When a group of high school teenagers monitored the news where the FBI arrested two individuals hiding in an abandoned warehouse, as they were there at the abandonment factor, they discovered a time machine. Suddenly FBI caught the kids before they did something stupid.
SYNOPSIS:
Time Travel
SCREENPLAY
Action/Adventure/Sci-fi/Family
It all started in the summer of 2021. All senior students graduate from high school by 18 or 19 years old and can do whatever they want and wherever they go.
A group of four sophomores and one senior high school, named PIERCE CUNNINGHAM, AUTIN MOORE, DANIELLA BARS, CHARLOTTE KING, and RICHIE MARTINEZ, both living in Santa Monica, California: four friends and one senior jock football player.
They had no idea what they wanted to do for the summer. They could’ve started thinking about getting a part-time job, going to the beach, having fun at the pacific park at the Santa Monica Pier, or staying at home doing nothing. So everything to themselves felt a little board for the summer. Every year on summer break, they have no plans or what to do with their lives. They must do something before they go back to school until fall.
Austin, Daniella, and Charlotte are at Peirce’s house hanging out like always every Saturday and Sunday when Peirce clicks channels until Daniella tells Peirce to stop there. Daniella was watching breaking news on channels where the FBI had arrested two men, and the government was shutting down the factory and knowing that building a top secret is illegal. So Daniella wants to look at it.
When the kids arrive at the abandoned factory and discover a time machine, when Pierce turns on the machine, and white fog appears, they tell each other to take a step and see what it looks like if they walk through. But then the FBI stop the kids before they do something foolish. Suddenly something is wrong with the time machine as they left it on for too much or malfunctioned, even if they try to stop the machine where it’s not responding. The time machine sucked the kids in and caused the time machine to burst and still stand and wasn’t eradicated, and they are worried about where the time machine took the kids.
Five kids look around and notice the people look so different; they aren’t even wearing clothes from 2021. It looks casualty. Men wearing pants are extended from the heels while wearing sandals. They are wearing shirtsleeve, long spike hair made into a different hair, and skateboarding on the sidewalk. Women wear other baby blue jeans with sandals, and some wear shoes and sneakers. But the clothes are different, and the hairstyle is different. They look flat and curly, like curly fries, and their personality looks slightly different.
The music sounds were so different from an original instrument with no tech to make beats. It’s not even more like fun music back in 2021. the music was nothing, but original rock became more punk rock, hip-hop, and even some pop music is even cleaner and doesn’t feel like their music wasn’t like that back in 2021. Pierce looks at the newspaper to see what year they’re in, and when he explains it to his friends, he discovers that the ring they ran toward was a time machine. He told them about what had just happened and how they arrived at the Santa Monica beach—they must’ve traveled in time in the summer of 2002.
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