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Two mis-matched under privileged mechanics; Claire and Pablo find unity when police describe them as accomplices for the assassination of Ryland Carpenter. Mayor Carpenter's 17-year-old son whose car exploded four minutes after leaving "Dean's Auto Repair."
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Hi! Do not use names in the logline, this is unnecessary information. Describe the characters with adjectives describing their character..
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Arthur Charpentier Thank you for the insight! Definitely will take that advice! =)