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YOU SAVED ME.
By Amate Brian
SYNOPSIS:
Tan was a drunk.He drank himself to death everyday and had no plans for his future.His mother always advised him but he proved stubborn and even laid his hands on his mom especially when he was drunk.But he repented from that when he had a drastic accident which he thought he will die but did not Cris was a drug addict.He smoked liked a chimney and took a lot of hard drugs.His mom too always advised him but he was so in love with it that he could not stop.But one unfortunate day,he discovered he had cancer which could lead to his death but his mom helped him with prayers and he was healed.From that day,he decided to give his life to Jesus Christ and stopped drugs. Kelly was a thug and his family was the streets.He robbed,killed,raped,sold drugs and did many other criminal things.But one day when he was in the act,he was shot four times but survived thanks to God.When he recovered,he became a full time christian.
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Will do. I'll let you know.
It has possibilities.
Really?So can you please be of help?
Okay thank you,Peter.Hope to hear from you soon.
Hi Ngoe. Good looking logline from the creative side. However, there are still several "technical" issues with it. Firstly, not sure if Stage 32's onscreen formatting does not allow for spaces following periods. If it does allow for it, I would recommend you add them. Secondly, I think it would be extremely beneficial for you (or maybe someone you know, since it's often difficult to proof your own stuff) to go over the Logline & Synopsis with a (pardon the cliche) fine-toothed comb. There are several typos in it. True, what you are saying is VERY important. But how it looks can sometimes make all the difference. Hope this helps. Peter
Thanks a lot,Peter.Actually,I am looking for a screenwriter in USA so we work on that and share the credits.It can open my doors to Hollywood.
A good thought. I'm a screenwriter in Canada, but there are certainly numerous American screenwriters here on Stage 32 that you can contact.
Okay I will tryand do that.But if you are interested in doing it with me,no problem.