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By RK Musgrave

GENRE: Thriller, Drama

After struggling to get pregnant for years, a married woman has an affair and becomes pregnant, desperate, she tells her secretly infertile husband the baby is his.


Janey and Thom have been trying to conceive for years. Janey is passed the point of obsession. Thom, fed up with feeling hollow and used by Janey’s obsession, secretly gets the snip and makes a deal with her – ‘no pregnancy in the next six months, no baby, no more trying.’ She reluctantly agrees. But her obsession gives way to resentment, grief and deep depression, so she seeks comfort in Doug, Thom’s best friend, and becomes pregnant. Desperate, Janey tells an infertile Thom the baby is his.

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