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AN ACCIDENTAL FAMILY
By Tom Batha
A sociopath who arranges revenge for victims hides from a murderous gang by masquerading as a suburban family man with the woman he’s fallen for and the young girl whose parents he killed.
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Tom, there's so much that I like about this, really strong idea. I do, however, think that it would be super helpful to streamline this a bit, if not simply adding some punctuation/breathing stops in.
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