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KILLER EYES
By Lauran Childs
SYNOPSIS:
Cleo comes out of prison after doing time for shooting her cheating boyfriend. She goes back to work as a contract killer and falls in love with Benicio, a childhood friend, along the way. After killing drug lord Jimmy Malone in a great fight scene, she escapes with the money and retires with Benicio.
KILLER EYES
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Okay, so the concept and the idea is there, and I feel like you have all three of the main components. This is probably the best logline I have seen on your page thus far. Now, I am no expert but my only question is in the wording. was recommended to use a formatting similar to the following.
MAIN CHARACTER must do THIS (Conflict), or else THIS (Stakes) happens.
I like how you have yours worded, but I am not sure if there is an "Industry standard" or "expectation" on what they expect the wording to look like. I will have to look into that.
Regardless, I like it so 5 stars!
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