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THE PACK (UPDATED 1-30-2015)
By Jazmen Darnell Brown

GENRE: Action, Adventure, Fantasy

Cursed to bring about the end of days, a group of supernatural teens must come together to prevent their dark desinty from coming to fruition.

Jazmen Darnell Brown

Looking for thoughts and comments on my log lines. I look forward to hearing your feedback.

Greg Hickey

This sounds cool, but "fighting off threats" could be more specific. I think listing a couple specific threats, which I'm sure are unique to your concept, could be a good way to attract a potential reader.

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