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THE WAY BACK HOME
By Jonathan LaPoma

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: A young boy who loves animals must cope with his father’s insistence that he will someday work in the slaughterhouse that has employed the men of his family for the past several generations. (KES meets BILLY ELLIOT).

SYNOPSIS:

Cody Swanson is born deaf into a working-class family in rural Wisconsin. As he grows up, he watches his father continuously beat down his mother, both physically and emotionally, and Cody escapes into a lonely world of silence. But after a touching encounter with a wild husky that wanders in his backyard, Cody is miraculously able to hear. Cody develops a strong love of animals and pledges his life to protecting them—an ill-fated goal, as it is at odds with the tradition of the generations of Swansons who have worked in the town slaughterhouse and the expectation of Cody’s father that someday Cody will also work there. Cody is conflicted by his loyalty to his father and his love for animals, but after he experiences consecutive, horrifying tragedies, he runs away from home and finds work in a canning factory in Madison. One day after work, Cody wanders through the campus of a nearby college and meets a beautiful and intelligent girl named Karen. Though he has feelings for her, Cody is reluctant to accept her romantic advances. He fears trusting his emotions due to the abuse he’d suffered as a child and the tragedies he’d recently witnessed, but he eventually submits to his desire, and he and Karen begin dating. Karen encourages Cody to take veterinary classes at the school, and Cody adjusts his hours at the canning factory so he can enroll. When Cody learns that his father has had a heart attack, he initially refuses to see him. Only after suspecting Karen of cheating on him does he change his mind. When Cody returns home, his ailing father fills Cody’s head with suspicion and contempt for Karen, and life in general. Cody tries to ignore his father’s bitter advice, but soon it infects him. Cody begins drinking heavily, and slowly drives Karen away. As his life spirals downward, Cody’s allegiance to his father strengthens, and Cody confronts the terrifying truth that, living in a world where few people ever really listen to one another, there is only one horrific way back home. Awards/Honors Won: -Hollywood Screenplay Contest, 2014, Grand Jury Prize--Best Overall Screenplay -London Film Awards, 2014, Grand Prize Winner--Feature Screenplay Category -Chicago Screenplay Contest, 2014, 3rd Place--Drama Category -Table Read My Screenplay, 2014, Semifinalist -Indie Gathering Film Festival, 2014, Honorable Mention -WriteMovies, 2014, Quarterfinalist -Ranked in Top 7% of the over 2,500 total scripts listed on MovieBytes.com -"Compelling premise, dynamic, recognizable characters. Snappy dialogue, solid story structure...Great scene painting, well done!" -Slamdance, 2014, Feedback -"A story that will stay with you and make you look in the mirror. A boldly honest story, so unbiased it can't help but be dark." -Warren Smith, Summit Talent and Literary Agency

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