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An eccentric group of criminals, all set up in a Witness Protection Program working inthe same building, thwart an assassin who’s found them and work together to make anew plan for the future.
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Stevan, I read your log line and I had the time to read your Wacky Witnesses pilot; I enjoy your writing.
As fellow writer, if I were working for wages in the Wacky Witnesses writers room, there would be many fun writing days because your pilot is full of conflict, complex relationships, and the icky toxic location, its a powder keg of opportunity, that has the potential for so many seasons.
I would love to watch it on T.V. Good Luck
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my script.
The most important of all the comments are the comments of fellow writers !!!
I wish you all the best in your career !!!