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SYNOPSIS:
Doug Baker is a career bank robber, and has gone uncaught for 10 years. As his mom's illness worsens, Doug is convinced to take on one final job, then he can disappear for good. However, Doug is forced to work with a new, a crew full of secrets and hidden agendas. Detective Ryan is a seasoned police detective who has been haunted by the unsolved robberies. Exterior pressures and other criminals keep Ryan from giving this case his full attention. The motivations and perseverance of Baker and Ryan to succeed cloud their judgement, hinder their personal lives and complicate their respective jobs. After all, pride does come before the fall. This screenplay was submitted into the PAGE International Screenwriting Competition. It was selected into the 2nd round of consideration before missing the next cut. However, 2nd round meant that this screenplay was in the top 25% of the 6,000+ submissions into the competition. I leave you all the first 45 pages of the story. This is more or less to showcase my writing style and display examples of my work.