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After his misguided release from an asylum, David is overrun by his ongoing mental disorders. In the mind-bending journey that follows, he has his revenge over his psychiatrist Adam and over all the Adams of his nightmarish world.
Appears that Pamela - like me - has read this script. I concur with her thoughts and ideas for the structure. These could certainly work and would help to build the drama to a clearer, more engaging finale.
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