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SITA'S REVENGE
By Adite Banerjie
A year after losing her twin in a tsunami, Tara visits the memorial site and uncovers the real horror of her sister's death.
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Nice start to a logline, but could do with some elaboration on what that horror is and how it pertains to the story and your lead. And who is Tara? Happy to chat further about your logline if you wish. Feel free to private message me.
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