This is an incredibly vivid and cool piece. Have you considered working it into one of your other screenplays as a scene, or do you feel like it should remain as a stand-alone work? I think it's great to find a writer who doesn't mind sharing parts of his creative thought process, or letting others see how your work evolves, stage by stage.
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This is an incredibly vivid and cool piece. Have you considered working it into one of your other screenplays as a scene, or do you feel like it should remain as a stand-alone work? I think it's great to find a writer who doesn't mind sharing parts of his creative thought process, or letting others see how your work evolves, stage by stage.