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Theo is a reclusive writer who goes to her father's cabin to get away from her jaded life, but Rosa shows up, and Theo doesn't quite know what to do with a woman carrying a shotgun.
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Would love to know the stakes. Can you add a "but..." Create conflict, in the logline, expectation. Hope this helps.
Thanks for the advice, still working on how exactly to word it, but will keep playing around with it!
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You getting it. Try to describe her tremendous fear of guns, so the reader can ask themselves, "I wonder why she fears guns so much?" Is it a phobia or did something happened in her pass as it relates to guns??? Mmm.. Get it?
A writer takes refuge at her father's cabin when a gun-toting woman unexpectedly shows up.