Dean Jones's Reel

I'm 17 years old and recently I made a test mockumentary involving my local scout group at a camp. The sole purpose of this project was to see how well I could edit, and exploit my camera to the max in a documentary style. The video was totally last minute and is unscripted and improvised. The video also contains a lot of real goings on. Please let me know what you think of it! My field is not in documentaries but I find it very interesting right from the filming to the editing. Apologies for...