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By Mike Gallant
A young American looking to escape his past, travels to Spain where he befriends a flamboyant French real estate mogul. Things turns ugly when he witnesses the Frenchman murder someone in cold blood and reveals that he has ties to organized cyber crime.
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Hi Mike, this is an interesting idea. I think rewording the logline a bit would give it better clarity - I'd recommend adding "but things turn ugly" or something like that after the word "mobster" to show the shift in the relationship between the American and French men.
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