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ADAM, EVE & TYRONE

ADAM, EVE & TYRONE
By Howard Johnson

GENRE: Mystery, Sci-fi, Thriller
LOGLINE:

After changing the course of history by preventing Eve from biting the apple and awaking in modern day to find that Egyptology is now the main religion, a distraught young man must find the priest who holds the answers that will return his world to Christianity.

SYNOPSIS:

ADAM, EVE & TYRONE

Synopsis

by

Howard Johnson

Tyrone has an argument with his fiance that leads to a horrible car accident and a trip to The Garden of Eden. After stopping eve from biting the apple, he awakes in a world where everyone worships according to their African ancestral heritage; Egyptology.

The people are all the same.His fiance; Diijah, thinks his disallusion is to avoid the fact he messaged another woman on facebook. Although she is having trouble dealing with their previous argument, she does her best to enlighten him on the culture. Their daughter; Imaani, is still 3 and more beautiful than a sunny day. She also does her best to inform Tyrone on the culture and he pretends he remembers. Their friends; Charles and Tamika, are even closer friends after Tyrones hospitilization. Even though Charles picks at Tyrone from time to time about his mental state,he does take time off of work to help Diijah with Imaani. His wife, Tamika, constantly rebukes his slick jokes and they both do their best to get Tyrone up to date on what's going on.

Eventually they all visit The Temple and Diijah urges Tyrone to talk to The Priest. He reluctantly does and is invited to The Priests hotel room. The Priest uncovers some strange things about the present. He tells him their was no Jesus, everyone worships ancient gods from the past and reveals his involvement with a secret brotherhood. When Tyrone leaves the hotel he has another accident, spends another breif spell in The Garden of Eden and awakes in his world of Chisitianity. So he thinks.

ADAM, EVE & TYRONE

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W Keith Sewell

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W Keith Sewell

I like the high-concept premise and logline. A lot would depend on how the storyline develops. Could possibly work better as a light-hearted comedy instead of a thriller.

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